Great job i love the feeling this gives off the first stanza was my favorite nice concept 5/5

Loosing you at anytime

**Losing you

loose my mind

***Lose my mind

Just thought that I would show you that:) Okay now that I'm done with that, I saw your thing in the requests to read and comment poems...it made me feel bad that no one returned your comments so I'll give you some:) I loved this poem-it reminded me a lot of how I feel sometimes with my boyfriend. I don't know what I'd do without him...I'd be so lost. You did a great job...keep up the good work!