Nice job a lil diffrent for what i have seen but for me thats always a good thing nice job keep it up

Good poem.... You spelled honor wrong though.

Silver, as always your work is great. The structure is excellent, and the imagery perfect. There is no need for me to say this, because you probably already know it: you are quite talented. I enjoy reading your poems, and am glad for having the opportunity of reading them. Keep it up, you are an inspiration for all of us.

I really liked this piece. do agree that i found it somewhat vague, but I, too, love that. It makes you read it voer and over and it really intrigues the reader. VERY nicely written and beautiful imagery used.

Oh and just a sidenote to Ashley Patterson: It isnt spelled incorrectly, its spelled the British way.

Your work is some of the best I've read on this site