Comments : Searching through Silence

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Its something about not being able to speak out, or not being heard, right? I got that feeling when I read it.
    I would suggest that you edited the funny symbols that popped up around some of the words, it makes it difficult to read. But the poem had a strange, deep beauty that I liked.

    Good Writing!
    beth