Great poem i like it 5/5
keep up the good work
lanibugz

Wow the writing was really good. the flow was kinda confusing, but i think it was jsut the way u had the lines broken up or something. but it was really good, and has alot of emotion. good job!!

*i wud appreciate it if u could comment on one of mine :o)*

.:mel:.

Hey gurl, this is really good wish i could write like this...well i love it :) cheak mine out if youo want k k luv ya gurl

Hey, i love ur poem!!! it flowed really nicely and made so much sense to me. i think i'll read and comment on ur other poems aswell.
*could you please comment on my poems? no one else does : ( *

Well done. gd poem. i liked it n de way u structured it, fit in wiv de poem. well done :D

~*WoW...that was really good one of the best poems i read in along time kepe up the good work i loved it 5++*~ XoXo

Hey...i like the poem, i feel the same way too sometimes....ur not alone...take care....comment on my poem i love you...have an awesome night.....much love
~eme
4/4

Hey yew man thats exactly how ii feel about the one ii luv

Great poem..............5/5...keep up the good work

Wow thats great i like it...
take care xoxo

Hey awsome poem.........I read your little advertisement thingy so I thought that i would read it and it was good. are you really one year old, thats what your profile says.......lol brook

*Between her Pencil and Paper
This is only how she escapes her*

I love this part.. I really like it, I give it a 5. great job!

Dany

Wow... amazing! keep up the great work... it flows well... keep it up

Hey i really like ur poem... very nice wording n stuff... check out mine... love ya xoxo

Yup, it was good. yup yup. nice poem, good words, nice ryhme, nice name, yup. k well yup i like it. yuppers.

Sara- your neighbor =)