Awww, i think this poem is really sweet, and even sweeter when you talking aobut your bf. U did a good job on this. thx for comments on my poems. If u like more love poems i wrote some about my bf, u can lookin "seek ecstacy" ttyl,

WOW you have talent 5/5
keep it up....
Leona

Wow hun awesome poem babe!!
aww it's so incredibly cute..
I loved the flow everythin bout this was great.
Only one spelling mistkae where you said stick instead of six:P
hope it went wel:P
xoxoxo

Lol i know im like dam!!!!
thx nd it did