Both parts are just amazing. I love the wording and the flow. two thumbs up. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I really like both of these poems. Theyr full of meaning ad emotion, they flow with such ease.. brilliant write.. keep it up xxx

Hi, thanks for your comment, i accept your thoughts, although I don't really appreciate them, And I was just wondering where I made a mistake? Just out of curiosity
thanks
emile xox

I lovers it! And now I wanna cry.. again..
Love sucks ass.. the relationship never lasts..
*sigh*

XoXo,
Fallen Dark Angel

First of all, that was fabulous. i loved it. and i shall read all the rest of your stuff, but tonight i must bid my puter adu, because my i cant be one TOO late. heehee *winks*. and thankyou for the comment. it boosted my confidence like 5 levels. i pressed some button by accident and then it went away, and then it came back. it said i praised your comment. that sounds a little arrogant, but whatever. your comment has officially been praised. toodles.