Comments : My own stupidity

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    I like it. I can't say that I have ever had a hang over...lucky for me. I have done my fair share of drinking though...and tend to embarrass myself.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Luanne,
    Great job...I remember some of the days of my past and this touched home...This one made me smile, so many stupid things I done back then...
    *giggles* you brought back a few memories.....
    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is awesome! I love the last three couplets, very funny stuff.
    It really cracks me up, cause me and a friend got drunk last Friday. Needless to say, we had plans to do it again this weekend, however....we're still recovering....lol!
    Thanks for sharing this, it's great~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Nice poem
    it brought a smile to my face

  • 18 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    Lol. ahahaa. that made me laugh. good job. =] 5/5

    -PassingAngel

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Lovely poem has really cheered me up (me being ill, I feel the urge to moan about it) It made me laugh :) I'm liking your funny poems

    "The next party I'll be there
    booty dancing upon a chair"

    Lots of images flew through my head, brilliant two lines, all in all a lovely poem, thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated, take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Esmeralda

    DAMN WELL I CAN'T TELL YOU THAT I'VE GOTTEN EVER GOTTEN A HANGOVER CUZ I'VE NEVER HAD ONE MAYBE SO THROWING UP BUT LUCKILY I DON'T GET THE NEXT DAY EFFECTS! BUT GOOD POEM I KNOW LOT'S OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE!

  • 18 years ago

    by lipgloss.and.letdown

    How many times has that happened? too many!! hangoverz suck ~*5/5*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very good and funny. That is how i act at parties and i think other people do to. People can really relate to this poem because thats how they are.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Yew 1

    Uhh..well written, i like it very much. rhyme and metaphor..good.i like your poems. i prefer writing poems too, great, let's keep it up.