Comments : Sometimes I wonder

  • 18 years ago

    by JV

    Aww thats so sweet i like it i wonder the same lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    I liked the gentle, question rhythm that it had, very nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Oi! I heart the ending. It's very nice....just when I have decided thia poem is too repetitive, you surprised me. =)

    My favourite lines were:

    "Sometimes I wonder,
    When I can stop wondering...
    and find out."

    Good job M'darling.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice job been there know how it feels keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I wonder about those things too...this is cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    I love this poem and i understand 100% its very true for a lot of girls, well you have some kick ass talent keep writing i loved it!!!!