I feel th esame way abou tsome one to but the truth of the matter is if he really love's you he would not hurt you liek this and there are others out ehre keep ur head up and dont give up 5.5 amazing poem love the deepness to it keep up the good work

I feel for you.
Ive been through that just recently

This is really deep, I love it. Beautifully written, 5/5!
xxxx

Excelent verse incredibel timeing and heart felt meaning 5 for you

That sounded very sad.
I could suggest some titles such as.

Love of Blood
Eternal Love
Bleeding

if you want me to think of any others just send me a post and I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Good Writing!
beth

I loved this poem. In my opinion, Untitled is a very good title for this poem. 5/5

Omg! that explains the exact feelings i have for this one guy! but, hes already got a girlfriend, but everyone thinks he likes me... ugh, he's so confusing! anyways, AWESOME poem, and like suggested before, you should keep the title 'Untitled'. it adds mystery, which is fun. 5/5

Wow--- very impressive yes

I love ur poem it was great~*~

This was a very good poem although at the end you just stoped...you left us hanging....other than that it was really good
5/5