Bibi..You Are The One

As i lay on my bed,
i am used to have a bread,
staring at nothing seems so black,
with tears on my face, so sad...

As i lean on your shoulder,
my world changes to blue,
the moment i decided to be your shelter,
i would stick to you like glue.

As you stand close to me,
you make me alive,
pls don't go away because i need
you throughout my life.

My mind comes out with a list,
with joys without sorrow, i want,
who gives me all these?
Bibi...You are the one!

Pls kindly give some comments for my poem.Thankin you in advance..i need your guidance:)