Wow that is a good poem for sure, but yeah thanks for the comment on my poem. i have to say i am very lucky to have what i do with my bf, but you write well.

Brooke

Very nicely written, the rythm and flow was very clear and easy to read and was worded very well. i particularly liked the last two stanzas. Very well written.

Why on earth was this poem only rated at one? its awesome!! i really love the way you write Avellana..you're gifted!! xox