Nice flow.. well done

Yep, nice flow.
But I loved the discribtion in it! It was so well written, but the title dosnt reallt catch my eye.
I really loved the poem your word usage wa very good.

Well done ☼lisa☼

Hehe yeah the titel is a bit to be worked on in honesty most of the things i write i dont name therm and just so happins the name for these comes from the page it was on in my notebook