Comments : Butterfly

  • 13 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    You need to keep your head up.. Your an amazing writer and you seem very strong... You poems are amazing and i love them..

  • 13 years ago

    by Moose

    I like the last two stanzas the most, they were great. They went together more than anything else in the rest of the poem. 5/5

    Bryce

  • 13 years ago

    by awww

    Not bad... i like it... i like the way you described it... keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 12 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very beautiful. Well done!
    God Bless 5/5
    You're very good at writing.

    ~Tay~

  • 12 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Whoa very pretty! so very emotional and a lot of ppl can probly relate. I love this great job!