That was very beautiful.
Although I couldn't work out the story behind it, it sounded touching all the same.
Keep up the nice poetry!
beth

I love this one. All the words string together perfectly. I don't know how to explain this one to myself, it's confusing yet it makes perfect sense. You definitley kept me reading through the whole poem, and I love it when a poem is like that.

Take Care,
Renee

I loved this one Dave! Very powerful. Awesome write!
Take care

Wow .. this was just beautiful. The passion described here just blew me away.

"hearts on fire
are now burnt to Ash's"
^amazing lines expressed here.

Well done *5/5*