You know, I like your poems. I've written one with the same title, a while ago. It's also named pain, but It's a whole different style of writing, I think. Your vocabulary is a lot bigger! :)
Maybe you'd like to read it,?

-x-

Oh my god this was great, it made me cry..you took the words out of my head this is EXACTLY how i feel 5/5
hope youre okay xx

OMG...it's amazing...although it makes me breathless when i finally manage to read it all...nice one...keep up the great work...

Nice harley, I loved it, very well written, of course im going to rate this a 5
Love always your friend,
Elissa

Okay this poem is very good like it's pretty amazing keep up the AMAZING work I'm lovin it!