This is very intersting. I like the concept and your flow is really good! Keep it up~Holly

I loved the flow and the wording.
Very nicely written if I must say.

*> : PainOfOne

A very original topic; it was great. The words just all strung together perfectly. Good job.
~Jaime

Wow
so sad
w iwsh i cried cause i feel so heartless now....
thats how deeply it affected me
congratulations on another well exicuted poem