Excellent poem man i really like it it flows nicely so yea man i gave u a 5.0 great poem...later

Excellent poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it & can relate.

Keep up the splendid creativity.

God bless & take care.

Wow.. this is truly amazing.. you're an awesome writer... i could feel everything written in this poem.. love sucks, doesn't it? this kind of stuff hurts a lot.. but life can go on.... hard to say sometimes, but you just have to keep your head up! great writing!!!!!
-DeAnna

Wow...so powerful and deep. i love it!!! you're very talented.

"But once again i let her break what i want to be real,
And the things that ill never be able to feel,"

...wow. that really stuck out for me. thank you for your comment, it means the world!!! take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

Oh i can relate so much with this poem. i could feel the emotion, and i can understand that feeling.

this part really touched me:

"But once again i let her break what i want to be real,
And the things that ill never be able to feel,
I wish i never met you for the pain is to strong,
And now my life wont be as long"

just... breathtaking

pili