VERY GOOD POEM AND VERY TRUTHFUL 5/5

Amazing poem. i love it. there is so much truth behind it. keep up the great work!
crystal

I liked this a lot..I think it would have flowed a lot better had you kept the rhyming scheme you began with, the rythym was just a tad off to me...but other than that it was really good, good message ect. Good job, keep up the great work XoX

That was a pretty good poem for a girl ur age...keep it up!

Wow, that was amazing elizabeth.
you wrote it beautifully.
thanks so much for your lovely
comment on my poem,
much love,
marjan