Awe... wow this was soo good! this is the kind of poem that i like to read... the kind that makes your heart beat fast and the kind when you get that funny feeling in your stomach... very very well written! amazing... good luck with this boy... dont worry im sure someday he will realize whats going on...

sammie

I'm a bit confused as to why some stanzas seem to have more lines than others. Although the confusion adds to the poems message.

Keep writing
Nici