Comments : Dreaming Again

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Nice! Here's a serious critique..

    "The say that we're strange."

    I'm sure you meant "they"

    And the first stanza:

    "They say that we're different
    The say that we're strange.
    They want us to be like them,
    But it's they that can't change.'

    Was alright, but it didn't flow as nicely in the last two lines.

    However, I enjoyed it, so kudos to you!

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