That poem waz so good!! 2 5's, keep writing good poems!! always keep ya head up so yeah! if u can check out sum of my poems!! iight thanx!! l8t4z from tha 1 *n* only scoopy

Damnit! Stop writing more poems then me! It's effing unbelievable!

My favourite lines were:

"You turned my heart from golden,
To the deepest, darkest black."

Also the last couple of lines:

"I told you not to kill yourself,
So you killed me instead."

*slap* That's for being better than me! =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Hey great. really, i loved the style. keep on writing this!

Good Writing!
beth

I loved it 5/5

I'd say this is beautiful
intense & i can relate totally... !
5/5
cuz its worth it