Hi liz.... the poem is nicely written the flow was pretty okay...
you know i feel pretty much the same way...
u must read my poem "murder or suicide"
it'll tell u all about this pian within
nice poem
nicely written
lovley submit
i gave u 5/5
keep it up
amy

That was sad and very well written.
I liked the way you wrote it.
keep it up.
wish you the best,
marjan

I love this part of the poem
"Maybe this time I wont shout,
But Ill be three quarters less than whole,
Because I will have put it all within."

nice job withthe poem but i do hope your ok. 5.5

I like your poem, your very talented. ^^ Keep up the wonderful work dear.

Ps. Thanks for your comment. ^^

You caught my attention with this poem...nice one...hope you are okey...and hey...can you comment on my poem entitled 'Complete For Now...'
Thanks...i'll check others later...