Hey, that was really, really sweet.
The only mistake I think was where u put "sent of appples of cinammon."
I think it should be scent, as in smell, or odour. But thats just a matter of style, really, so dont take it personally.

Good Writing!
beth

Nice job keep up the good work i liek the last part that was kool and your flow only at some poingts i like that keep it up

Its a nice poem...
great job
i see ur poems are real different from the others in the site
amy

Wow, this poem rocks. i love christmas and this has made me seen the real face of it. Teehee! Shu xXx

As I have written in the poetry contest:

"This poem is truly amazing and I heart the way it rhymed without repeating itself much. In the first stanza you mention about the reindeer, and you repeated it again in stanza four. Though it kinda repeated itself, you somehow made it work, very nice."

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Such a lovely poem! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside =)
5/5