Even though it'as partially free formed, it effing unbelievable! My favourite lines were the whole damn poem!

Kudos to you!

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Hiya. good poem, i enjoyed reading it, cud u check out sum of mine wen u get de time plz. once again gd poem.well done

The way you wrote it was very good.
and it had good choice of wrods
so, I liked it.
take care,
marjan

That was an outstanding poem! Great job! My favorite lines were:

"Who would stand, and who would fall?

Who is destined to help us all?"

Good job! Keep up the wonderful work!

~BJ~