I think I understand the concept of them now, thanks for that, funny poem as well its made me really smile so thanks :)

"Oh how I love to eat sardines?
Just the thought makes my face turn puce!
Gas in my tummy, they induce.
They don't go that well with baked beans."

I agree, they dont go well at all with baked beans, in fact they go terribly with baked beans...

I will have a go at a sardine later on

well done :)
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Brilliant, made me smile! Not heard of a sardine before. Some interesting words you've placed in the poem, make it really stand out. Full of character and interest. Nice one!

I hate sardines! hate em, hate em, hate em...lol. but I love this poem, its my new favorite. :)

Lol I that was a great laugh!

by the way... your comment on my poem "Grandma" I just wanted to say umm... no no one was around I was home alone for a long time afterwards too... but when i read your comment you can not believe how much of a relief i felt... i felt like someone was standing beside me telling me that my granmd was going to be alright... I could almost feel a hand on my shoulder i know you prbly didnt mean for it to mean that much but i was able to breathe slowly when i read your poem thanx a million!!
-Rachel
youre on my favorites list and always will be thanx for the encouragement!!

Well done bud. you are a never ending source of inspiration.