Wow! amazing piece! you ended it perfectly. I love the rhyming and the message behind this...as always keep up the good work

Very powerful message within this piece. Wonderful write

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Bill !
What an amazing job ... So much meaning ... Beautiful work as always .

Bill, terrific poem! A very nice picture of life on the street and how rough it can be. Nice job!

Wow u really do have a gift for writng ur words are great wow.
ps; Is weird dat u would call ur poem BARRIO dat being in spanish COOL!...

Mi gusta sus poem es muy bueno
-chorro-

Miro a mis poems tambein grais