Thats a real awesome poem
keep writing!

I agree. amazing poem ('',) i hope your alright... i really liked this, it was rather quite interesting. keep it up xx

Great poem u have!
i like the story flow alot
5/5 surely
if u could.. check out my poems..
kk keep writting!

Aww this is really good.. and i dnt cut anymore i used to i just wrote in the past and im not proud of it lol.. you should really try and stop.. i only did it a few times...anyways GREAT POEM.. AWESOME SKILLSS KEEP IT UP!!!!!!

Really well written, a lot of emotion.
5/5, good flow and choice of words

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xx

Awesome poem hun, i love how the razorblade's talking... i want one to talk to me lol *pouts*

hehe 5

Dats so beautiful i hearts it so much!!! an u comment o some of my poems??

Your poem is really good. I love how it's not from your point of view, but from the razor. Thanks for commenting on mine. It means a lot. Keep writing!
> Kiesha

Wow, another brilliant poem, ur writing is very good, its an origional idea, and the temptation is expressed very well. xxx

That's a real good poem, baby girl ! ;)

Good poem!! i can realte to it...:( keep on writing!!! thnx 4 ur comment!! dani xxxx

Wow thats really deep its very good 5/5

Wow this is brill 5/5. Keep it up...Thanks for commenting on my poem..!

Wow your a wonderful poet...keep up the fantastic work...also thank you for the comment...

I can relate to that poem.. know ho you feel.. good job!!:)

Hey!!! wow!!! thats really excellent and deep.. have to admit it catches you extremely deep.. you got alot of talent.. flaunt it!!!! MWAH
thanks for the comment on mine....

I can so relate to it... i just wanna say that ur an awesome writer and keep it up! MUCH LUV....X3T.E.A.X3

Wow that was amazing i love it

I really liked this poem and think u have a great talent for writin! check mine if u get a chance

Hey that was so good i loved it!!!