It's wonderful but sad.
your mind is a beauty all of it's own
keep up the work

Wonderful stuff. very well writen. and i love the ending
keep going strong

Ruby

Yeah the ending was great, a little sad but nice, i like poems like dat, u manage to share ur emotions, without depressing teh reader
thanks for commenting on my poem
Peace

Wow great poem.

Hey zorry, that wadda gud 1. yay. u doing gud hun. huggles, i love ma katana

Very well riten a 5/5

Look i never wanted to bring you too your knees. or hurt you and that was a miss understanding.... I WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR YOU! AND I ALWAYS WILL!