I auctually think this is really good i think you should continue on it a little more make it a bit longer its.
awesome though 5/5
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Hey, thanx 4 the comment, no im not really 1 year old.. haha.. im 15.. ((i just changed it on my profile...))... i like this poem, its kool.. in a really sad way...

keep up the good work!
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I know what u mean great job at telling how it feels