Comments : What should I do?

  • 18 years ago

    by disenchanted

    Yes i have felt like that! Its always so confusing and complicated.
    Great poem i can really relate!
    I loved this part:

    I'm so confused,
    what path should I take?
    Better yet I ask,
    What choices shall I make?

    5/5!
    ~aMy~

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    Yes I do! I feel it everyday. Making choices isn't my greatest strength either. But that's the facts of life. Great poem by the way good job! 5/5

    Black~Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Yes! I feel like that all the time! It's cool to see a poem come out of your indecision, but I hope that it gets better. I know what it's like to be doing something you know is wrong, but feels righ, and then to have to make yourself do what is right when it feels like it's killing you.
    I love to read poems like this I can relate to, I'll be sure to read more.
    Best Wishes
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by happyGIRL

    I liked it very touching

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Yes. I know what you feel at times like these. But I could never put that into words like you did....beautiful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Awww.. I feel that way a lot, babe.. I know how it feels! And you don't have to keep things from me!!! I'm here if you ever need to talk to me.. Promise i'll try my best to help, if you promise to atleast pretend to be happier when I try to cheer you up and not make me seem like an idiot saying all those stupid things I say : /... Great poem, sweets! *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    You are such a gr8 writer! i cant believe you are so young, its just amazing! :))
    jessy

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria

    I really liked this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayd

    I can relate, and surprizingly well.

    Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by veeda

    I feel like that all the time Tyler...

  • 17 years ago

    by Evil love

    I can so relate to that feeling, keep up the good work,
    5/5

  • This be an uber good poem, i know that i've felt that way before, even if i wish i hadn't

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Yes i know what it feels like. And it so confusing tyring to give yourself an anwser. I loved the poem btw lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    I love this poem and yeah I felt that way too

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    I'm so confused,
    what path should I take?
    Better yet I ask,
    What choices shall I make?

    ^ i really liked that.. you have a great way of expressing your emotionss... and i have felt this way before, and it was a weirdd feelingg.. everything i did felt like somethign wasnt right about it... great job nontheless 5/5 from me yet againn

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Good poem and yes i kno how it feels.

  • This a very good poem.I've asked myself thoses same questions and wonder those same things many times but just follow your heart and everything will work out for the best.5/5

    <3Amber