Lines: 16
repeat: 8 whole lines

do not take what i have to say as an insult it's just to me this could be a strong poem but the fact that half the poem is one line it weakens it. so maybe on future poems you can try to avoid it. other then that i really like the idea and the last line is excelent! i like it. my opinions thought: your always good enough to love another.

~Jacklyn