Uh, this poem..is okay. (Im not gonna lie..) Theres something I dont like about it, maybe the ending. But your still a great writter Andrew. :) One of my favorites here.

-Love yah, Jennifer.

Cooz cooz! I wanna hear the song...this is a song right? Well, I disagree with the PREVIOUS comment ((woot! big word)) I really like it! Great job buddy boy!