That was really sad, but it was good. I liked it. I'm so sorry if this really happened. Take care.
> Kiesha

Again, great job. your work is a piece of art! ... this one was one of the best yet, i loved it. ;D

Heidi

It cute in the end he knew what he had to do. in the beging i like it too... i love it and love ur poem. keep doing what u do best. writing poems =)