This was an excellent read. I must say I am impressed by your talent, such a vivid imagery, and diction, and very efficiently structured. All helped to convey meaning. Well done.

Good poem. A poem that makes me think. 5/5
~you can work on your flow

Very deep Liz,
I loved it, you have great talent,
-Ashley

Nice...so nice..i love it...hey and thanks for your comments...receiving comments like that is also my happiness...hey i'll check others later...quite busy...

I really liked that one! you have some talent! tnx so much for ur comment on mine.
x0x0 heather

You always think your so tall,
But take away your cape,
Rip away the mask,
Your as short as me,
And you probably know it, too.

I loved this stanza. I loved how you referred to people being tall and short instead of strong and weak.
This also isn't your best..yet it is. It's odd... It flowed nicely though, and I did like the topic. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like this one poem. I thought the structre, flow and rythym was amazingly done. Along with it being a great write.