Comments : Autumn so serene.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    This is simply beautiful, I too love the autumn, and you portrayed its beauty and wonder magnificently, I felt so captured by your poem, the descriptions made me think of going to the park with my family in the autumn, with all the red leaves and the conkers falling, and the squirrels running round, really wonderful piece of writing, I hope I can write a nature piece like this one day

    "For me, Autumn is the best time of year,
    when nature's wondrous colors and splendor are at it's best.
    A wonderful cycle that repeats itself,
    another year about to end"

    I agree with you on this, Autumn is the best season for me also...

    Well done, beautiful poem
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Steven
    A very calming and pleasant piece. Autumn is my favorite time of the yr. also....Great job...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh I so love Autumn, all the smells and sounds with two wonderful holidays too, Halloween and Thanksgiving. Beautiful write, brings back many memories of my childhood.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Come on! why does everybody love the autumn season? you're making me love it now...when I used to hate it. :) Can't you write a poem about winter? seriously who has fun raking leaves?? I don't.

    okay, okay, this was absolutely beautiful...soothing in a way. I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is a truly fantastic piece of work, Steven. The poem flows with ease, and you succeed in recreating nature's beauty in words. Well done! The imagery is efficient, and the diction is excellent. Great poem!