Comments : Beginning to be Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    "I've got plenty more friends" this line seemed out of place, and didnt really fit within what you were saying in the second stanza.

    "My face I'm willing to forget" do you mean "His face..." because forget your own face sounds strange.

    "I'm starting to love again
    I'm beginning to be me"

    Loved these lines. Best part of the poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by abandonedmistake

    Hey gurl it was your poem that i read just oes to show you how much i knoe you i love this poem and i can really relate to it i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so powerful! I can so totally relate to this poem!

    Mallori:)