Girl, keep your rhyme scheme the same, it gets confusing...still good though,.

Hye, Thanks For The Comment =]]
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I went through this. And I understand everything you wrote in here. this is a very good poem, everything flows perfectly.
Katrina

I went through this. And I understand everything you wrote in here. this is a very good poem, everything flows perfectly.
Katrina