Nice, i liked this one alot;)

Awww how sweet! This is good, the flow was great!! and it has alot of emotion in it! Wel doen!!

xx

Amazing and sweet i like how u put deep feeling in it keep it up ~beckey~

This is also a beautiful i like it.it has alot of feeling.5/5
Struggling XOXO

Omg omg omg
that was graet. teavh me how you write or SOMETHING!!! lol

Oh! it kept me on my toes the whole time. I MUST know what happens next! 5/5 from me!

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
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