Comments : So far from touch

  • 18 years ago

    by Keri

    Really nice read i enjoyed it alot. i gave it a 5

    Tc xx

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent job. some suggestions
    The first two lines of all your stanzas are have pretty good flow.
    Try:
    you're the best person, i can find
    you might not be popular
    but i cant let go, i just cant choose
    mind, overtaking my heart

    ~and get rid of the last line of that stanza