I like the way this is written, it's unique and leaves an impression of lonliness. Something I'm going through right now, I really liked it.

I like your poems and altough they probably have some realy deep mening and everything you dont really get it too shine true. I like them and of course I can see what your "telling" me but maybe you should focus not on maiking it rime but get a deep mening. I know you have it in you;) great work!