I liked this a lot. it was very beautifully written. I loved the comparison of the tapping of your feet and your heartbeat, very nicely done. The only thing I found a bit odd was the line:

"Whirling for but a second..."

I'd personally have it say:

"Whirling but for a second..."

But its your poem, so you needn't change it. I really liked it, I'll be sure to read more of yours.

I really liked this,.. it has a nice flow and rhythm to it.. i like how you depicted them dancing,.. though it was a good poem, i didn't really feel any strong emotions from it.. it might just be me, but it doesn't seem to have any "outstanding" parts.. the poem itself is good; i really love the idea here, but it seemed like you didnt take it far enough or didnt describe it well enough.. other than that i dont have any suggestions.. the first four lines are my favorite.. good read

Interesting poem, unusual way of writing a love poem creative. Try to make it longer, Thanks for your comment

Love how I am able to picture the story your poetry is telling -- this is something you should try to do with all of your poems

Its interesting.......its lovely.
maybe make it a bit longer? but its great how it is. thanx for the comments you gave, im really grateful! Not many people actually give the advise you did and im very thankful! could i ask for a favour? its just, one of my poems, "come fly with me" is for a friend and i want to give it too her....so some honest advise would be really appreciated! If you ever want me to return the favour, i would be happy to!
jesxxx

Once again very good poem...I like the first line...really drew me into the poem...and the flow was nice...enjoyed it very much....

Great job once again. It has good flow.

Aww that is adorable and your an amazing writer! Great job hunny!!!!!