This is amazing and i love the concept. you've written it in a non-specific way such that it can relate to pretty much anyone ^_^ keep up the great work.

Learn to love
and not to
soon you'll see
her in your fate....

Don't mind the stanza.. just something that came to mind...

Amazing poem...and as always, wonderfully written... As far as I know you-- it really makes me wonder where you get all these feelings from.... you have this power of touching hearts with every word you say...

A toute a l'heure

Love,
Ipsita

Sorry--- i forgot to put in a word..

it's-
learn to love
and not to h a t e

Hey sourav, I think the flow of this
poem is really great. you're a great
poet.
much love,
marjan

Great work.

I loved it!

Love the poem.. keep up the good work

Nice work! i liked the 2nd last stanza.
Life is crying and love is lost
Living with the tired thought
Fighting a battle that is already lost
This is the end; I'm trapped & caught
i loved these lines.........

Ohh hun this is excellent very deep and an important message in it all, i loved it great work, take care

Very well said, it sounds so meaningful, good job!-xxx-

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem!! yours are excellent as well, do you have an email? i love talkn to new people

Wow unrequited love, its so hard to deal with and your poem says it all....beautifully written souray, thank you for taking the time to look at my work.

**Lis**

Excellent thoughts composed and very well received. Keep up the great work & thank you for the kind comment.
Peace =o)

Hey, thanks for the comment. i really do appreciate any feedback i get on my writing, seeing how new i am and all.

you're an excellent writer. it takes talent to so successfully express things such as that. as many have said, i too can relate to much of this poem, after subtracting the love element.

fighting a battle that is already lost
^absolutely love that line!

hope you're doing ok, keep up the spectacular work!

Very nicely written
Some excellent comparisons in this poem with very heartfelt wording
5/5
*Gem*