Strange, but different and nice. I liked the imagery and the words, they sounded good. The only thing you could have done would be to put it across more clearly that you're talking about how it is to be the storm. But thats really just a matter of style, and not really a mistake.

Good Writing!
beth

That was so beauticfully written.

Kudos to you, M'Dear.

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Great poem, really strong imergry and a very unique peice.

5/5

"Being the storm,
you saw not many rainbows
just smelled the ground as you sheered off
Being the storm
You have cast lots of shadows
And parts of light
Playing through the clouds"

i really like that verse,
good comparisons and use of language.
overall very good.
keep up the great work

Very original, I don't think I've read a poem like this before. I like how descriptive you were and that you used all the seasons