Comments : Who Am I?

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Tlatoani That was deep and very well written. If you like, take a look at my
    poem"why so sad?"
    when we know there's a loving God
    and he loves everyone what's the
    reason to be sad? even if all of
    the people are against us God will
    never leave us.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by SplitSided

    That wasn't all that bad...I'd work on the rhyme scheme but that's just me i liked that one and yea..i can relate to that one..5/5 keep your head up..it'll work out in the end..keep em comin..i got faith in you as a writer...peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Mona Al

    That was OH MY GOD, where do I begin seriously dude, You have pretty much written out what has been eating my heart. Honestly I give u a 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wow... it leave me speechless. very powerful! the ending is very efective
    a very strong poem

    Ruby