by Marjan
Tlatoani That was deep and very well written. If you like, take a look at my |
by SplitSided
That wasn't all that bad...I'd work on the rhyme scheme but that's just me i liked that one and yea..i can relate to that one..5/5 keep your head up..it'll work out in the end..keep em comin..i got faith in you as a writer...peace |
by Mona Al
That was OH MY GOD, where do I begin seriously dude, You have pretty much written out what has been eating my heart. Honestly I give u a 5/5. |
by ShadowDancer
Wow... it leave me speechless. very powerful! the ending is very efective |