Comments : Unfinished

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Lovely
    love it
    it i love
    it love i
    etc...etc...
    love you xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Strange, beautiful language, and it gave a sort of calm feeling, that was nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by sharni

    Really good

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    That's beautiful hun

  • 18 years ago

    by sharni

    I really like this one because of the describing words are really effective.