That reletes to so much

Wow, your poem is rly deep,and i used to feel this way awhile ago, but i finally got through that, i hope you do too...You write well, keep it up

I thoght that was good as michelle,
keep ritin coz u r real good n dont tell me ur not

Hopefully heaven will be your dream,
You just have to get through the gate.
Or down below you go,
To determine your afterlife fate.
So even life is worse than hell,
We distinguished that already.
But depends what hell you live in.
It's unpredictable where you go, so you better be ready.

that was a good ending i thort, so yeh...keep ritin, 5/5