I liked it, its pretty emotional, i give u a 5, u got to be strong, i know u love this guy, but dont do it, ur only setting your self for a really painful fall, hang in there chica

Dis is such a beautiful poem i love it!!!!

Awww, thts so sad *huggles* i hope evrything gets better for you. tht poem had so much emotions and feeling put into it!
becca x

Awwww, hun I am so sorry that you are going through a rough time... I hope that your weekend will be GREAT and that you won't even have to think about him, though I don't know what happened and you probably will think about him, but I hope that you are okay. I'm here for you to lean on if ever you need me okay? Don't forget that. I am a great listener! I love ya hun!
Love always,
~BJ~

Hey, great poem by the way. I can only advise you to stay strong and stick with common sense.
the best of luck!

Good Writing!
beth

Very touchig i would call him but thats up to u

I enjoyed this poem, and kind of know how it feels. "And just when I think the worse is over,
My situation only gets more complexed.
I've built a wall for my heart,
For I'm afraid of what comes next." I thought that was a very good line. Good job and good luck.

Girl all i can say is that u can love him all u want but he's probly a jerk to have done wateva he's done to be ur ex. but ya know theres someone in ur life rite now who loves u and cares about u so much even though u hardly know him. and just to let ya know i'm always there for ya to!! luvs ya (as a friend of course) you'll be fine!!(i suck at writting comments i really do but ur poem was great)

Hey hon

Great poem, Very well writen.

i can totaly understand where your coming from, but you have to remember that when its over its over.

It took me too long to find that out, and i hope that doesnt happen to you.

BIG HUGS!

Awww Ashley, I know you are going though a really tuff time right now. If you need someone to lean on I'll be right here waitting for you. I loved the poem it was awsome. Keep up the good work hun. This was an very emotional poem. Best of luck with everything you do in live.

LOVE YOU LOTS
BIG HUGS

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Kewl

Hey great pome babe i loved it
i can relate to that with a few past times of mine love ya lots babe KEEP WRITTING

Sucks that ur weekend will suck. It also sucks that that happened to you. Just move on in your life and forget about the bad meories in your past.:)

Wow talk about a masterpiece

That was gud ash. an i still like ur pic. wuhahahaha. well gud luck this weekend. and tc. huggles

Great job wow that's how i feel my comp. got mest up that's y i didn't read it yesterday 5/5
xoxo cecilia

Hey babes well i think your a great poet and i hope things werent to horrid!im always here if ya want a chat love ya xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Aww, don't worry Miss Ashley. He could be caught up in something right now, there's always those things. And yes being in love and sad is a pain. But time does heal everything. You just haven't let enough of it pass by. Trust me, it's been almost a year and I still haven't completely gotten over him yet. But I think that's because I havne't found someone to help me forget him. That's why I'm still out there looking. Well, anyway I hope things get better for you miss ashley. beautiful poem, very heart felt and emotional..I loved it! *hugs*

I like it, but it's been done.
Try to make up things you have never seen on the site before.
I try to stay fresh, I know it always doesn't work but you have to try.
I liked it but I've read it many times before on this site.
4/5

Hey hottie what are you doing this si me whittney i havent gotten my own thing yet so just talk to me in the chat rooms
whittney