I liked the choice of words.
It had good rhyme.
you seem really talented.
keep up the great work.
take care,
marjan

:''( (Tears) Yeah I definately know how that is. To wanan run away.. as far as you can. Just being overwhelmed by it all.... Just gotta live it day by day, step by step.. sometimes minute by minute.

Wow your so talented
i love your poems keep up
the good work

Nice use of words!