Comments : Lost

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awww hun, stay strong!! i glad you gave up the blade, very very relieved. beautiful poem as always. keep it up!
    -xXx-
    P.S. didn't mean to make you think of throwing your porcelain dolls out :P lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Great poem...

    Blade isn't the solution to all
    It won't make you stand
    It'll help you fall....

    Stay strong at heart and things will go just fine... good work

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • I want to go back to the blade and that crimson kiss.

    i LOVED this line, its really powerful, i can relate fully to this.
    It's beautifully written, it's very personal and it reads really well.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Ok...get over that shining silver knight...you know you are not alone...that's good...so..stay strong hun...