I like the first two stanza's but the last one kind of ruined the flow and it took the poem to a different ending then the reader thought it would. i though you could end it better then that. the first two brought promise and uncertainty but the last one, i don't know it was just weaker and then jsut suddenly ended.

but the first two were good. keep up the work!

~Jacklyn

"Wishing to hear you say
how you love me too
and that we could escape
to a place far away"

This stanza seems almost magical, i think at one point everyone wants to take their love one and vanish somewhere, even if it's only for a little while.
5/5
*Gem*